created by Melissa Mae Rara...
"Melissa mae Rara" mm_angelfeathers@yahoo.com
hopes you like her story :)
hey... so uhm here's the story...its a romantic one...well it's practically a "scene" from my story...so expect some thrills on the other scenes...so as u can see below it's based on two perspective/point of view...so i had to write their name before of what they think or say...
and yeah i know!! my name is there! i intended it....i just want to write something with my name on it, to try if it feels awkward...well it is...but not enough to stop me from writing it....
hope you enjoy reading it.... e-mail me back for your comments or reactions!!!:D (criticisms are accepted, it will help me a lot,..i guess?..hehehe..joke..it will help.. :)
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Jake: I can’t believe I’m actually pacing back and forth on the street of Greensville village. I feel idiotic talking to myself! But I just can’t help it!
“Shit! What makes those boy Korean’s styles so attractive and captivating!!! Yeah that’s right, THERE NOT!!! I really can’t understand female mind!!!!!!!” I continued pacing.
Yet I’m here feeling intimidated?!?! No, I’m not intimidated! I argued with myself…. “Ugh, she said… they’re so cool!! Look at their hair! Oh my gosh they’re style’s so cute! Ang astig!” I imitate her voice.
Melissa: “What are you saying??” I said as I was approaching Jake.
Jake: what? where did she come out from? I didn’t notice her there before…ugh…
“NOTHING!” I meant to say that calmly but I was surprised that the voice came out shouting. Mad. I quickly turned around and held on a position with my arms tightly crossed against my chest.
Melissa: whoa, he’s really mad… And he seems oblivious that I’ve been standing beside this tree for a long time now. I didn’t know he’d mind me complimenting them. He should have known better to get jealous. I chuckled. Replacing him with another guy is just completely ludicrous. He should have known I love him so much more…I don’t even want to leave his side.
I slowly walked toward his direction.
Jake: I was aware now that Melissa is approaching but I’m not planning to face her and talk to her either. I’m mad at her... no, I mean, I’m not. I’m just…those boys!!! The way they… and the way Melissa addresses them! … Or… am I really just… I can’t even say the word! What a bizarre feeling! Stronger than I’ve heard it is! It’s much more intense!
Melissa: I’m closer to him now. I’m already at his back. He looked so rigid in his pose. Absentmindedly…or was it? ... I put both of my arms in his firm arms. And lean my cheeks at his shoulder.
“They’re nothing compared to you. I love you. Your exactly the type and exactly the perfect style of guy I’ll want…love forever.” I said each word precisely and slowly. I want him to feel my essence that I really mean it. “I didn’t think you’d mind. You know how much I love you. There’s nothing to get uneasy about…… And by the way…” I let out a low chuckle. “You’re a whole lot cuter and so much better than them!”
Jake: I felt Melissa’s hands stroked my arms to embrace me. Her skin as soft as the softest pillow. She whispered into my ear with the sweetest voice and the loveliest words. I catched every word she said. What stunned me were the words I love you…; and the forever. Suddenly all that pacing seemed to be completely ridiculous. Reasonless. Then most importantly, I felt tranquil.
I took both of her hands. Held it tight and placed our now intertwined fingers in my cheeks and kissed her precious hands. It felt so good. It felt home.
Melissa: I felt Jake’s hands move to take mine. His hand’s so warm. And I felt the urge to never take my hands from his. That I’d be very comfortable and satisfied staying like this for the rest of my life. He pressed our entwined hands on his cheeks. And to my surprise his soft lips touched my unsuspecting hand.
Jake: Feeling completely stupid, I turned around, and saw the awed gaze of the beautiful angel that I can’t hardly believe who feels the same way I do for her too. I locked her gaze in mine, and still holding her hands.
“I love you…” I said it with great passion.
“Sorry I acted that way…I love you… I’m sorry… I love you” I chimed over and over.
Melissa: Jake turned around still holding my hands. I don’t know what he found in my face but suddenly he looked so pleased. And all that emotion he portrayed earlier vanished. He locked his gaze on mine, and then he said “I love you”. My heart throbbed unsteadily in reaction to his defined words. It felt like it wanted to beat its way out of my chest. He seemed unaware of my unstable heart. He continued saying sorry and I love you over and over.
I chuckled and shushed him. Then I said “I Love You More”
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(ok that's all for now...:) do u like it?? dnt 4get to e-mail back ok :>)
hmm actually I'm still on the process of editing the story so maybe this will be changed a bit..anyway it's sample :D
THANKS FOR READING! :)
~MeLisSa~ :)